Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Problem's In Mesopotamia
It is not very easy working in the hot fields of mesopotamia.Especially when your working in sumer.We have alot of problems because almost every time we have serious flash flooding's happening here.Another problem that we have that we have is that we always have to stop the river's from overflowing especially the Tigris and the Euphrates rivers.We thought of building levees so the water flows to other villages.Another problem that wehave is that we always to walk the Zagros Mountains I just wish we could have something faster to climb the mountains.
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i like your story. the details support with your topic and main idea. you have strong details.you explain everything in your story.thats what makes your story a good one and strong.keep it up.
ReplyDeleteGood job Brian but they didn't always have flash floodings because they also made levees made from hard mud. And I think you should add more details but it was a good story but you didn't write were they came from all you said was that they walked up th zagros mountains.Good job from Cesar Alvarez Columbia
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